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Rebecca Barry's avatar

Wow, Emily. Talk about each sentence pulling the reader to read the next one! Riveting!

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Emily Sanders Hopkins's avatar

Oh thank you, Rebecca!

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Faithe Joy Day's avatar

I couldn't stop reading - it was so visual and visceral. Great writing!

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Emily Sanders Hopkins's avatar

Yay! Thank you, Faithe Joy! I really appreciate hearing that. xo

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Dawn Downey's avatar

Emily, a sad, familiar story. Damn.

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Brad Edmondson's avatar

really good. More about this character please

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